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Name: Momina Khan
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mona21khan   
Jan 12, 2019
Writing Feedback / Effects of technology (impact on users and on different industries). 250 word essay [4]

Effects of Technology



a 250 word essay ILETs
Need help and advice to improve my writing skills

Technology has made a huge advancement since it's discovery. It is well known to save us time and energy. It has had positive and negative effect on its users. This essay reflects on the positive effect technology has had on todays society.

Technologies use in the communication industry has made it possible for users to connect with anyone around the world in an instant. With the use of smart mobile phones and internet services, it has become so much easier, quicker and convenient to get in touch with families, friends and colleagues all over the world.

The use of live chat technology such as skype, viber, facebook messenger allows users to view the person we are having a conversation with, making conversations much more meaningful. Many business use live chat to engage in conference and meeting. Such advanced technology has made it very convenient for us to get in touch with others either locally or internationally.

Technology in the education industry has made it possible for many users to gain or advance their qualification. Few decades ago the only form of education available was based in classroom, where student had to be present in person.

However, these days with the use of the internet services it has become much more convenient and easy for anyone who wants to gain or advance there qualification. Many student with significant disability or those from isolated geographical areas, can now have the option of attending online learning setting to gain or advance there education from the comfort of there homes.

Technology has had many positive impact on its users. Technology has overcome many barriers that existed last century. It has allowed isolated members of the society to become much more engaged in meaningful activities.
mona21khan   
Jan 11, 2019
Writing Feedback / IELTS essay: Should everyone follow a vegetarianism diet? [5]

Don't you have to give references when you start using such facts and figures. I was under the impression that ILETS writing was based on life experience and knowledge not on facts and figures.

Secondly, a meat-free diet does not provide sufficient nutrients for human, In a 2003 study published by American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, the ratio of vegetarian people suffering from vitamin B12 deficiency is 2 in 3, while that of meat eaters is 1 in 20. On top of that, vegetarians are shown to have a higher chance of anxiety and depression.

This paragraph looks like it is been referred to someone else research
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