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Posts by rolanda
Name: rolanda
Joined: Jan 14, 2019
Last Post: Jan 19, 2019
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rolanda   
Jan 19, 2019
Writing Feedback / Group study or self-study, which is better? [7]

Hi, I hope this helps a little.

I think: "There are two opinions when it comes to campus student studying method, studying alone or studying as a group." is smoother.

This method allows students not to be dependent on other partners and learn in the way that works best for them --->This method allows students to be independent and study in a way that works best for them.

evaluate the accuracy of their viewpoints and correct any...
verbalizing concepts and explaining materials to other teammates help to reinforce ideas and enhance their comprehension.

Although two study methods are really beneficial, I believe no method is superior to the other ---> Although both methods are beneficial, I believe neither one is superior.

You can try to read the essay as a whole and try to make it easier to understand.
rolanda   
Jan 19, 2019
Scholarship / A chance to become a physician-scientist in cancer biology program. KGSP (Personal Statement) [2]

Hello everyone, I am applying for the Graduate Program of The Korean Government Scholarship (KGSP) and this is my first time writing a personal statement.

I'd really appreciate every review I could receive to strengthen my case.

inspired to become a doctor



Being born into a third-generation Chinese family in Indonesia, I am exposed to various culture and language. Therefore, I speak fluent Indonesian and Chinese since I was born and learning a new language always fascinates me. My family consists of seven persons. I am the first child of five siblings. When I was a high-school student, my mother was diagnosed with hypothyroid. I was told that my mom has to take the medicines for her whole life. I remember it was the moment I was inspired to be a doctor. I want to be able to take care of my family's health. In 2015, my aunt was diagnosed with a malignant type of breast cancer. Seeing her suffering from chemotherapy, radiotherapy and a couple of surgeries throughout these years become a turning point in my life. It triggered my desire to contribute to the effort of cancer research and studies.

My parents always taught me to never be afraid to try new things and also have the perseverance and the determination to make it to the end. The first year into medical school was a challenging year for me. The most challenging part is to manage time and achieve a balanced lifestyle. The excessive workloads and sleep-deprived could easily lead to burnout and I was able to overcome it all and graduate medical school in 6 years because of the support that my family and teachers gave me.

During my clerkship, I had the opportunities to learn to practice my medical knowledge and interact directly with patients in several hospitals across Indonesia. In every 3 months, I had to move to another city to do my clinical rotation, and that increases my ability to adapt to a new environment in a short period.

The environment I studied and practiced medicine was a unique environment from socioeconomic and cultural perspectives, there are significant regional disparities in terms of health status in the quality, availability, and capacity of health services. Growing up in a society where healthcare is a relatively low priority, and the government investment in the health system has been limited, leading to insufficient research facilities, inspired me to apply to the KGSP scholarship. I had the pleasure of visiting South Korea twice, and since then I'm fascinated by Korean's hardworking attitude and also the advanced technology.

Korea had the reputation of having a world-class cancer research program, experience and excellent experts, innovative systems to improve the cancer treatment outcome and also the immense amount of research output. The fact that age-standardized cancer incidence rates in Korea have decreased since 2012 and the mortality rates have also declined since 2002, however, the 5-year survival rates have improved remarkably shows the advancement of the research and practice of cancer science in Korea. The KGSP scholarships will give me the opportunity to continue my advanced studies in one of the leading global research nations. I believe joining the Master in Cancer Biology program in Korea will be an important step towards my dream to contribute to cancer research and practice as a physician-scientist. Being trained by the leading experts in cancer biology research and equipped with advanced technology will be a turning point in my life.
rolanda   
Jan 19, 2019
Scholarship / Security, Intelligence and Strategic studies Erasmus Mundus Scholarship 2019 [2]

I hope this helps a little.

The one year plus I have spent post-graduation has been life-changing.

quasi-boot

clean-up

breastfeeding

health hazards ... were looked into ..., we sensitized the public ... by using sandbags especially ... In addition, my team ... issues like flood-prone areas ...

... we did an outreach ...

... their number was rapidly ...

... one of the founding members of ...
We organized seminars ...
Furthermore, this programme supports my future...
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