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Harman8484

Mar 3, 2019

Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1: LEFT WALLET WITH A FRIEND DURING HOLIDAY. [2]

receiving forgotten wallet back

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized that you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1) Thank your friend for the holiday
2)Explain that you left your wallet in their place.
3)Give them instruction of how to send it back to you.

Dear Rudolph

I have reached home safely and hope you are doing great back home. I am writing this letter to tell you that i had a great week with you during my holiday, but unfortunately i forgot my wallet at your place.

Firstly i would like to appreciate the hospitality which you offered during the week at your place. But while i was leaving back to my house i forgot to pick my wallet. As far as i remember the last time i saw my wallet was in the drawer which is in the left side of the closet in your room. The color of the wallet is beige, mid-sized and of Arrow brand. It had my important identity proofs like PAN, DL, etc. and $ 200.

I will be very thankful to you if you send it back urgently as i have to travel in two weeks. You can send it through Fastrack courier services, they charge very nominal and they have a turnaround time of a week. I will request you to use the money from my wallet and you have to post it to my old address which is 21, old baker street, westmeister, 1334655.

I look forward to receiving the wallet and hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Thank You
Wiley

Harman8484

Feb 24, 2019

Writing Feedback / Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life [3]

You can rephrase the general statement like this: Switching jobs once and opting different work is advantageous as per some of the population.I agree with this notion and believe it helps in improvement of skills and develop a challenging attitude.

para 1: You have used the example in the second sentence. According to me you should use more general statement. Like: " People in a particular job tend to use a limited resource which is available there within, they need to explore more so that they can excel in their field."

A new working .... This sentence can be written as ""A new working environment can help us in getting to learn new techniques and practices which are available, which can further enhance our productivity.""

Their are grammatical mistakes in your sentences. You need to work on these.

For example, I came ...
For example, When i came to know about the option available in Microsoft Excel which i was unaware from my colleagues, i saved a considerable amount of time. Had i been working for the old employer i would have never learned about it and would still be working the old fashioned way.

In second paragraph you should give one example also to support your reason.

I am not a professional but here is my feedback. Hope it helps you achieve the target score. All the best and Thanks