Writing Feedback / Social media (Advantages and Disadvantages) [3]

Zoheb, nice name, just a quick observation. On the third paragraph, second sentence, you doubled the "our". Doubling words is a common mistake people tend to make, so i suggest that you do a thorough read up of all your subsequent works before you do a final posting. But with that being said its an okay piece but good for a starter, with consistent practice and more research, i personally think your ideas will pop up better. thanks