Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 1] - Table: The amount of money given in aid of technology of developing countries. [3]

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support in US dollars for technology in developing countries

Topic: the table shows the amount of money given in aid of technology of developing countries by charities in the US, EU and other countries from 2006 to 2010.

The given graph illustrates how much money US, EU and other countries support technology of developing countries between 2006 and 2010 in term of billions USD.

Overall, money from these countries aiding to technological development was increased. Also, the figure for US was the highest during the period shown.

In 2006, the amount of money given in the technology aid of US was 9.7 billion USD. Over the next four years, there was a significant growth in the figure for US and reaching its peak of 22.7 billion in 2010. During the period shown, the total money donation of 2010 was 30 billion USD, which was nearly two times as much as that of 2006.

Meanwhile, the donations of EU and other countries were similar and steadily increased from 2006 to 2008. In 2009, however, the level of technological aid of other contries considerably decreased to 2.6 billion. Moreover, the figure for EU countries also slightly dropped to 3.7 billion USD in 2009 before going up to 4.0 billion in the last.

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