Writing Feedback / The graph shows the proportion of people visiting 4 destinations in Brighton - period of 1980 & 2010 [2]

Tourists to England - LINE GRAPH (ACADEMIC WRITING)

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the proportion of people visiting 4 destinations in Brighton during the period of 1980 and 2010
As can be seen from the graph,it is clearly evident that the patterns greatly differed over the time frame.While the number of tourists visit pavilion as well as pier tended to increase,that of festival and art galley had an downward trend.

The percentage of visitors to pavilion went up steadily by 30% from more than 20% to nearly 50% between 1980 and 1995. But later this pattern dove steeply to around 35% and gradually declined to 30% in 2010.The percentage of people go to pier had some slight fluctuations then after 2000 there was a dramatic upward to more than 20% in 2010.

An opposite pattern could be observed in the number of visitors to art gallery.As it reached a peak of about 40% in 1985 ,moreover the years 1995 and 2010 experienced a nonstop drop to approximately 10% .

The proportion of tourists to festival remained relatively unchanged around 30%.
( SOME QUESTIONS:
-How can i make a comparision in this
-Are there any word to use instead of "Proportion" or "percentage"?
- Is it okay to use the phrase " the number of " in the "%" essay ?

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Writing Feedback / TASK 1 ( IELTS ACADEMIC ) Outokumpu companies share price - LINE GRAPH [3]

the change of share-priced of outokumpu companies

The line graph demonstrates the change of share-priced of outokumpu companies in a five-year period from january 2006 throught december 2010.
As can be seen from the graph, it is clearly evident that the pattern of share price greatly differed over the time frame.
At the beginning of the course, the share price stood at about 12.5 EUR .This figure then had some fluctuations around 17 to 20 EUR in 2006.
The year 2007 experienced a rapid climb in the share price which reached a peak of more than 30 EUR.The share price then dove dramatically by 10 EUR from 30 to 20 EUR in between 2007 and mid 2008.

In 2018 , The share price underwented a fast upward trend (around 30 EURO) .However this did not last long, the share price came down steeply to approximately 7 EUR in the beginning of 2009.During the period of 2009 and 2010,there was a violent fluctuation in the amount of price share .And finally , at the end of the period ,the price share was ,around 10 EUR.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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  The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between Ja