shureoni
Aug 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / The map shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010-IELTS TASK1 (Academic) Map [5]
some changes --> the changing patterns
some changes --> the changing patterns
shureoni
Aug 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK2: Nowadays, adolescents and adults constitute a vast majority of some nation's population [5]
I think you should conclude more clearly, like summarizing the main reasons... of this trend
I think you should conclude more clearly, like summarizing the main reasons... of this trend
shureoni
Jun 29, 2019
Writing Feedback / Summarise the information of two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 [2]
Through this map, it can be easily seen that there was a remarkable development of this area. Except for the stabilization of city hospital campus and Ring Road, underlying features are intersection and parking spaces changes.
From 2007 to 2010, two roundabouts were added. One is located at the three-way junction of the hospital road and the Ring Road, while the second one is situated at the four-way intersection of the hospital road and the city road. This sensible arrangement helped generate the flow of traffic and alleviate accident proportion of this place.
The second change improving the visibility of this road was the parking lot and bus space. In 2007, both staff and public had their rights to park, three years later that parking space was divided into two spaces, one to the right of hospital road for employees and one in front of the hospital gate for public. Three bus stops were substituted for a bus station leading to both two roundabouts to facilitate citizens' needs.
The maps illustrated the way to approach a city hospital in 2 different years.
Through this map, it can be easily seen that there was a remarkable development of this area. Except for the stabilization of city hospital campus and Ring Road, underlying features are intersection and parking spaces changes.
From 2007 to 2010, two roundabouts were added. One is located at the three-way junction of the hospital road and the Ring Road, while the second one is situated at the four-way intersection of the hospital road and the city road. This sensible arrangement helped generate the flow of traffic and alleviate accident proportion of this place.
The second change improving the visibility of this road was the parking lot and bus space. In 2007, both staff and public had their rights to park, three years later that parking space was divided into two spaces, one to the right of hospital road for employees and one in front of the hospital gate for public. Three bus stops were substituted for a bus station leading to both two roundabouts to facilitate citizens' needs.
