Writing Feedback / IELTS1:THE CHART SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF MALE AND FEMALE WHO WERE OVERWEIGHT IN AUSTRALIA 1980, 2010 [4]

Wow! You have written an amazing description of the chart. There were few gramatical errors, which @ghadianysaina has highlighted, but that's okay.

Writing Feedback / IELTS writing task 1 (1) The table gives information about changes in modes of travel in England.... [2]

It's a wonderful essay!
Here are some edits that I prefer:

long-distance

traveled
significantly

The taxi
the number ..., the taxi was still classified as an unpopular

can be divided
Car, long-distance
... decreased from

Overall, the car was always
for the English public.

Thanks