Posts by starrrr

starrrr

Jan 6, 2020

Writing Feedback / I agree that the media coverage of celebrities have a negative impact on children [4]

Hi, I think it would be best if you could show/researched about recent studies about this kind of issue so your essay will not solely be based on your opinions alone. This way, you can have evidence or factual basis to back up what you believed in. For the grammatical purpose, you have to double-check before submitting it to your professors. I'm not a professional to give advice. This is just purely based on what I have read in your work :D Grammarly app is a huge help for me when it comes to grammar. You might want to check that out.

starrrr

Nov 23, 2019

Essays / GKS SCHOLARSHIP PREPARATIONS - what to write, how long? [4]

personal statement draft

Hi, I would like to ask for your help. I am writing a draft about personal statement. As I researched about samples, I stumbled upon this site. So anyway, this is my question;

1) Do I really need to write my essay with this pattern,
o Motivations with which you apply for this program
o Your education and work experience in relation to GKS.
o Reason for studying in Korea
o Any other aspects of your background and interests which may help us evaluate your aptitude and passion
for graduate study or research.

or I can write how I want it as long as I am able to show the required information for my personal statement?

p.s. Im preparing this early for next year, since I heard GKS annually do this. :D