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travel to and from the uk, destinations of the british tourists

The line graph provides data on the number of British visited aboard and the international travelers who came to Britain over the period of 35 years while the bar chart illustrates from which countries the UK's residents regularly visited in 2004.

Overall, the pattern of British visitors was always higher than the pattern of foreign visitors who came to UK, with the divided into two group of countries which one had a huge number of British visitors and the another had less attractive than the first group.

The trend of UK visitors has a remarkably grow from nearly 10 million people in 1979 to properly 60 million people in 2004, approximately six times more than in 1979. There was a rapidly rose in the number of overseas residents visited England, though not by the same amount. In the two periods of 1994 to 1989 and 1989 to 2004, the trend was increased slowly.Conversely, in the period of 1984 and 1989, the number of foreign visitors to UK went up nearly doubled than in 1984.

As it observed in the bar chart, France and Spain is the most popular countries that attracted a lot of visitors from England in 2004, respectively 11 million and 9 million travelers annually. On the other hand, the group of remainder three countries included USA, Greece and Turkey had lower number of British visitors, around 4 million people a year.

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