King heart
Dec 15, 2019
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 : Solar Energy for Water Heating and Panels Location [4]
Hello Good Night sir...
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I'm Try your classmate..
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He we go...
Just the only suggestion that I give to you!!
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First of all, from the grammar mistake you have!
*do not forget your article the process
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*Missing S on the subject-verb agreement - should be beginS
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*Spellingtrun change becoming turn
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*Cold water <===> without space Coldwater
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*pass<===> use passing or passes because the subject is water should be plural
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* by putting
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#This just a few suggestion that I guess it...
#Thank you very much and have a nice day 😊
Hello Good Night sir...
.
I'm Try your classmate..
.
He we go...
Just the only suggestion that I give to you!!
.
First of all, from the grammar mistake you have!
*do not forget your article the process
.
*Missing S on the subject-verb agreement - should be beginS
.
*Spelling
.
*
.
*
.
* by putting
.
#This just a few suggestion that I guess it...
#Thank you very much and have a nice day 😊