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Name: Tri susilo hadi
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Last Post: Dec 15, 2019
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School: Harvard University

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King heart   
Dec 15, 2019
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 : Solar Energy for Water Heating and Panels Location [4]

Hello Good Night sir...
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I'm Try your classmate..
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He we go...

Just the only suggestion that I give to you!!
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First of all, from the grammar mistake you have!
*do not forget your article the process
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*Missing S on the subject-verb agreement - should be beginS
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*Spelling trun change becoming turn
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*Cold water <===> without space Coldwater
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*pass<===> use passing or passes because the subject is water should be plural
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* by putting
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#This just a few suggestion that I guess it...
#Thank you very much and have a nice day 😊
King heart   
Dec 15, 2019
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 the process of solar power - energy from the sunlight [2]

usage of sunlight energy for heating



A process of solar-powered water heating system cycling is illustrated in the figure based on location options from several stages.

From the initial stages, solar panels ideal is the position angle to the sun with approximately 90%. Afterward, the advantage of these solar panels which located on the rooftop that makes more practice and efficiently while the drawback of that one of those is difficult to clean and fix, but it would be nice if the south-facing position makes it easy to get sunlight and put above ground level. Then thus should are not be obstructed by trees.

A detailed look at more clearly in the previous comparison on the diagram is supplied in many steps. First, solar panels energy is easy to take energy from the sun, controlling by indicator pumps to operate the electricity. Also, supplying electric power before through the thermal fluid to drain water. Ultimately, a heating coil in the passing water tank before passing cold water, then it would be taken out to taps and showers.

Overall, although the starting process with the extraction of energy from sunlight, eventually, showing how to link domestic electricity to the external power supply.



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