anhthythy
Jan 16, 2020
Writing Feedback / Aging populations in countries - WRITING TASK 1 Ielts [5]
@Holt
thank you so much. I need to improve my writing skill more :D
@Holt
thank you so much. I need to improve my writing skill more :D
anhthythy
Jan 5, 2020
Writing Feedback / Aging populations in countries - WRITING TASK 1 Ielts [5]
The line chart illustrated the percentage of population aged 65 years and over in three different countries namely USA, Sweden, Japan between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, it is obvious that the proportion of population aged 65 years and over in three different countries increase sharply from 1940 to 2040.
The figure of population aged 65 years and over of Japan saw a minimal decrease from 5% to around 3% from 1940 to 1960. Then there was a stability in the figure from 1960 to 1980. After that, A drammatical growth by 20% was seen in the figure between 1980 and 2040. The percentage of population aged 65 and over of USA rose substantially from around 9% to about 15% from 1940 to 1980. The percentage declined gradually of 2% through the period between 1980 and 2020. Then a significant rise by 10% in the percentage of population aged 65 years and over of USA was witnessed in 2040. We can see that was a increase of the proportion of population 65 years and over of Sweden similar to. The proportion of population 65 years and over of Sweden went up remarkably from about 7% to over 14% from 1940 to 1980. Then there was a slight drop by 1% in the proportion through the period. After that, the year 2040 was experianced a considerable growth by 12% from around 2000 to 2040.
proportion of of population aged 65 years and over
The line chart illustrated the percentage of population aged 65 years and over in three different countries namely USA, Sweden, Japan between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, it is obvious that the proportion of population aged 65 years and over in three different countries increase sharply from 1940 to 2040.
The figure of population aged 65 years and over of Japan saw a minimal decrease from 5% to around 3% from 1940 to 1960. Then there was a stability in the figure from 1960 to 1980. After that, A drammatical growth by 20% was seen in the figure between 1980 and 2040. The percentage of population aged 65 and over of USA rose substantially from around 9% to about 15% from 1940 to 1980. The percentage declined gradually of 2% through the period between 1980 and 2020. Then a significant rise by 10% in the percentage of population aged 65 years and over of USA was witnessed in 2040. We can see that was a increase of the proportion of population 65 years and over of Sweden similar to. The proportion of population 65 years and over of Sweden went up remarkably from about 7% to over 14% from 1940 to 1980. Then there was a slight drop by 1% in the proportion through the period. After that, the year 2040 was experianced a considerable growth by 12% from around 2000 to 2040.
