hahahazh
Jan 12, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task1: The diagram below shows the process of milk production [3]
@Holt
Thanks for your help. I will try harder.
@Holt
Thanks for your help. I will try harder.
hahahazh
Jan 12, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task1: The diagram below shows the process of milk production [3]
Overall, it is evident that the whole process involves 5 primary steps, starting from cows is grazed and ending with milk products.
Milk comes from the dairy cows, which are grazed in the farms. Firstly, once mature, the dairy cows will be came to a milking machine that is repeated twice a day. This is followed by milk is stored in refrigeration storage before milk tanker daily delivery to dairy. Next in the factory milk, milk is converted to cheese, cream and butter or pasteurized and packaged. Finally, packaged milk will be shown to sell in supermarkets and shops.
The diagram shows the stages in the process of milk production
Overall, it is evident that the whole process involves 5 primary steps, starting from cows is grazed and ending with milk products.
Milk comes from the dairy cows, which are grazed in the farms. Firstly, once mature, the dairy cows will be came to a milking machine that is repeated twice a day. This is followed by milk is stored in refrigeration storage before milk tanker daily delivery to dairy. Next in the factory milk, milk is converted to cheese, cream and butter or pasteurized and packaged. Finally, packaged milk will be shown to sell in supermarkets and shops.
