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Jan 24, 2020
Writing Feedback / Export earnings 2015-2016. IELTS writing task 1 [3]
Hi everyone,
I'm taking the IELTS and I hope to improve my writing skill. Any reply or feedback of contributing purpose will be very meaningful.
essay
The chart illustrates the valuation of one country' exported product over the period of a year from 2015 to 2016.
It's immediately obvious that most of the figures rose after a year. Additionally, petroleum products were the most valid ones.
In 2015,exported petroleum products's worth was over 60 billion dollars which made it the most valuable product in the year. The second highest product whose value was just slightly less than the petroleum one is engineered products. Its exportation value was approximately 58 billion dollars. The Value of gem stood lower at relatively 40 billion. Agricultural products valuation was only a half of the petroleum products and the lowest was the textile products.
In 2016, it can be noted that petroleum products experienced a slight increase by 3 percent whereas the engineered products's valuation rose pretty considerably by 8.5 percent . Gem products are the only exported products experienced a small decrease in valuation in this period with a decrease of 5.18 percent. While agricultural products almost stayed the same, the textile ones value significantly rose up to over 30 billion.
Hi everyone,
I'm taking the IELTS and I hope to improve my writing skill. Any reply or feedback of contributing purpose will be very meaningful.
essay
exported product valuation
The chart illustrates the valuation of one country' exported product over the period of a year from 2015 to 2016.
It's immediately obvious that most of the figures rose after a year. Additionally, petroleum products were the most valid ones.
In 2015,exported petroleum products's worth was over 60 billion dollars which made it the most valuable product in the year. The second highest product whose value was just slightly less than the petroleum one is engineered products. Its exportation value was approximately 58 billion dollars. The Value of gem stood lower at relatively 40 billion. Agricultural products valuation was only a half of the petroleum products and the lowest was the textile products.
In 2016, it can be noted that petroleum products experienced a slight increase by 3 percent whereas the engineered products's valuation rose pretty considerably by 8.5 percent . Gem products are the only exported products experienced a small decrease in valuation in this period with a decrease of 5.18 percent. While agricultural products almost stayed the same, the textile ones value significantly rose up to over 30 billion.
