Scholarship / PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE [2]

Hi guys ? can you help me to revise my essay cause i thing there is a lot of wrong words
here's some points on personal statement should be included on the essay
-Motivations with which you apply for this program
-Family and Education background
-Significant experiences you have had; risks you have taken and achievements you have made, persons or events that have had a significant influence on you

-Extracurricular activities such as club activities, community service activities or work experiences
-If applicable, describe awards you have received, publications you have made, or skills you have acquired, etc.

PERSONAL STATEMENT

I am motivated to apply Global Korea Scholarship to see how science develop in Korea, especially in biology andandtechnology I think this program will give me a great chance to reach my dream.

One of the reasons I apply this scholarship is My Parents, they support me to join this program because they know this program would be so helpful for me to continue my study.

For the past three years I have been in the top three. Furthermore, I was chosen to follow sakuraexchange program in Japan, and it gaves me a meanungfullexperience and make me more determined to study abroad.

I have followed Chemistry competition province level and being top ten, from that experience I increase my confident to study and learn many things specially in science.

I really wish to get the scholarship through which I will have a chance to study in an excellent University and pave a road to my future career and accomplishment of my life goals. It will give me freedom to study without thinking about the future financial burden and relieving my parents from the stress of not being able to afford of my education.

At the end I would like to point out that I am determined to make the most out of the scholarship program. I believe that being a student in a prestigious University would not only empower my career development, but would give me the tools to utilize my full potentials.

Scholarship / Global Korean Scholarship Study Plan for Improve Language to reach my goals [2]

Essay Study Plants for improve language

Language is one of every human's ability to communicate to others human to make a conversation and talking which is have a purpose, On the other hand languange is a culture in every country where also describes the characteristics of the country from which we can see a uniqueness

Growing up amazed by the diverse culture difference from all over the world and gradually influenced by their media and culture, I developed interests in Korean and English. Achieving a goal, especially one as challenging as mastering foreign languages, requires much planning. Still, my primary focus, of course, is to become fluent in Korean, so I have developed a detailed plan of actions.

My plan to improve my skill about Korean Language, I have time table that I use to learn Korean Language before going to korea.:

- Learn basic Korean Grammmar from Korean language textbook
- Memorizing 10 Korean Words per dayand write it on a book.
- Make one paragraph sentence in Korean, once a week
- Try to read some Korean Articles
- Watch some Korean Shows would help my accent skill
- To improve my listening skill I will watch some audio listening from YouTube

After I come to Korea, I will follow Korean Language Class and sharpen my Korean Language ability,
I will try:
-To always attend my language training classes which will expand my knowledge about the structure of Korean grammar and improve my vocabulary.
-Reach my goal is to be able to receive a TOPIK 6 certificate within the first year of Korean language training in korea
-Learn about Korean Manners in communication
- Getting more Korean friends will surely allow me to become a proficient speaker.

At the end my goals when I enter campus life I will be able to write in Korean language well so when I have assignments and should deals with Korean language, I can do it well. I will try my best to improve my Korean language ability at speaking to more fluent and be able to have a long conversation with the teachers and friend as well.