Writing Feedback / Task 2 IELTS - People living longer after retirement - people's health [6]

You can consider my opinion about this one
1. Problem
Risk of health lead to pay health care more since people is getting older, being susceptible toward disease
2. Solution
Limitation on instantly health care related on medicine

Writing Feedback / Society's appreciation and attention to teachers [5]

you can add in the conclusion by paraphrase the introduction

e.g teacher as professional is able to guide student as well as role in the society based on their degree