HestiDevi
Nov 22, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task 2 IELTS - People living longer after retirement - people's health [6]
You can consider my opinion about this one
1. Problem
Risk of health lead to pay health care more since people is getting older, being susceptible toward disease
2. Solution
Limitation on instantly health care related on medicine
You can consider my opinion about this one
1. Problem
Risk of health lead to pay health care more since people is getting older, being susceptible toward disease
2. Solution
Limitation on instantly health care related on medicine
