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Writing Feedback / Women who worked in parliament - IELTS _Writing Task 1_Line Chart [8]
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my123456
Mar 29, 2020
Writing Feedback / Women who worked in parliament - IELTS _Writing Task 1_Line Chart [8]
@Holt
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my123456
Mar 27, 2020
Scholarship / Current Duties and Responsibilities as District Program Coordinator [6]
patient-centric ->Possible spelling mistake found
psychosocial-> psycho social
patient-centric ->Possible spelling mistake found
psychosocial-> psycho social
my123456
Mar 27, 2020
Writing Feedback / Women who worked in parliament - IELTS _Writing Task 1_Line Chart [8]
The line graph illustrates the proportion of women who worked in parliament in 5 different countries over a 12 year-period.
Overall, it is clear that the figure for ladies of UK in most years was lowest. However, the throughout the period shown, the percentage of female members increased in all 5 nations.
In 2000, over 33% women of Germany worked in congress that was highest. The Women figures for France and UK and were similar in 2000, around 25%, respectively, whereas the figure for Belgium was lower than 3 countries , about 20%. Although the strongest increase, the percentage of women in parliament in the UK were still lowest from under 5% in 200 to 20% in 2008.
Between 2008 and 2012, Italy's rate grew more than Germany and reached the highest point about 40% in 2012. Female members in Belgium decreased slowly and equaled the UK in 2012, around 22%. In France, the proportion of women saw a gradual rise during the 12 years, reaching a final figure of just over 30% in 2012.
Female members of parliament
The line graph illustrates the proportion of women who worked in parliament in 5 different countries over a 12 year-period.
Overall, it is clear that the figure for ladies of UK in most years was lowest. However, the throughout the period shown, the percentage of female members increased in all 5 nations.
In 2000, over 33% women of Germany worked in congress that was highest. The Women figures for France and UK and were similar in 2000, around 25%, respectively, whereas the figure for Belgium was lower than 3 countries , about 20%. Although the strongest increase, the percentage of women in parliament in the UK were still lowest from under 5% in 200 to 20% in 2008.
Between 2008 and 2012, Italy's rate grew more than Germany and reached the highest point about 40% in 2012. Female members in Belgium decreased slowly and equaled the UK in 2012, around 22%. In France, the proportion of women saw a gradual rise during the 12 years, reaching a final figure of just over 30% in 2012.
