Writing Feedback / Older generations have traditional values about how people should live, think and behave [2]

The old way of thinking in the modern life

The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extend do you agree or disagree this view?

Nowadays, it is true that the different between traditional values in the past and traditional values in the modern life has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although some ideas are outdated, I believe that others are useful in preparing younger generations.

On the one hand, there are many the view of older generations become less relevant in the modern world. First, in the past, it is significant that the roles of men and women are trained to become a good breadwinners and guarantee housewives respectively, but now this view could not have been attached much importance. Second, secure job is such a key factor that decide someone success or fail in the old day; however, youngsters desire to experience as well as try to many different works. They tend to keen on diversity and new trial in their career path. Moreover, young adults get themselves to make decision on finding a partner and getting married of their choice.

On the other hand, youngsters can learn a lot of traditional values which bring many lessons today. In the era of integration and development in the globalized world, in no way do young generations not to get in touch with people coming from various cultural. Therefore, youngsters can be able to inheritance politeness and good manners like respectful, hospitable from previous generations. Besides, by learning about working hard and taking pride in one's work of elderly generations, there are many benefits helping young people in their work for a better job. Finally, one of the most element making people happier is neighborliness, so in my view young generations should learn this value from older people.

In conclusion, although old way thinking may sometimes seem to not suitable in today's world, what some traditional ideas bring for youngsters are really necessary and helpful in the modern life.

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Writing Feedback / Students should study whatever they like or only allowed to study subjects that will be useful [2]

Students decide what they want to learn

Nowadays, the question of whether students should get themselves to decide what they want to learn or to be forced into useful subject at university has been a great deal of public attention. I believe that learner should make their choice to study courses.

First, there are various good reasons why people study subjects that will be helpful for their future. Since to be trained in about specialized knowledge like science, technology, medical at university, students can be able to find a good career path, high salaries as well as improve quality of life after graduated. This mean, they can apply their understanding helping community in real life. Second, by making effort to lean subjects related to science and technology, students would invent more modern equipments such as smartphone, subway making life easier and more convenient.

On the other hand, in my view, students should make decision on choosing courses of their choice. If they learn about what they want to do in the future like art, music, they will be success. This mean, when someone effort to pursue their passion, they improve creative thinking skills and work productivity.

In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like.