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Students should study whatever they like or only allowed to study subjects that will be useful

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Mar 25, 2020   #1

Students decide what they want to learn

Nowadays, the question of whether students should get themselves to decide what they want to learn or to be forced into useful subject at university has been a great deal of public attention. I believe that learner should make their choice to study courses.

First, there are various good reasons why people study subjects that will be helpful for their future. Since to be trained in about specialized knowledge like science, technology, medical at university, students can be able to find a good career path, high salaries as well as improve quality of life after graduated. This mean, they can apply their understanding helping community in real life. Second, by making effort to lean subjects related to science and technology, students would invent more modern equipments such as smartphone, subway making life easier and more convenient.

On the other hand, in my view, students should make decision on choosing courses of their choice. If they learn about what they want to do in the future like art, music, they will be success. This mean, when someone effort to pursue their passion, they improve creative thinking skills and work productivity.

In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to study whatever they like.

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Mar 25, 2020   #2
This is a comparative discussion with a personal opinion essay. The one thing this is not is a personal opinion alone essay. Since you have already made that discussion topic mistake, your essay will receive points deductions for being only partially responsive to the prompt. It will receive additional points deductions for being under the minimum word count (223 out of 250 words) and, will also receive appropriate word count deductions representative of the missing discussion requirements. Based on these problems with the task presentation alone, it will be safe to say that this is not a 5 band score essay. You need to make sure that you meet the minimum word count and also, discuss the essay in the required format. The format for the discussion is always indicated after the discussion question is posed in this presentation, the discussion format was:

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It will be in your best interest to read the other sample essays here first. Familiarize yourself with the various discussion formats for the Task 2 essay. Make sure you understand how the presentation format is expected be represented in your paper. Make sure you understand the different types of discussion formats before you write another practice test.

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