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Posts by Hannah Jamson
Name: Nguyen Hong Trang
Joined: Apr 6, 2020
Last Post: Apr 6, 2020
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From: Viet Nam
School: Foreign trade University

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Hannah Jamson   
Apr 6, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: There is a claim that oral communication is more effective than writing communication [3]

Personally, your essay is pretty good but few mistakes in grammar. Especially, there are no linking verbs between each sentence when they are necessary, and such phrases as "to use another common of this practice" and "speaking of st" make sentences a little weird, you should google their usage carefully again. I see loads of outstanding vocabs; however, u should expand the diversity of structure in order to make the essay become more impressive. Those's all recommends I would like to share with you, hope that they can help to to improve your writing skill
Hannah Jamson   
Apr 6, 2020
Letters / Letter writed for responding a request (magazine subscription) [2]

You recently subscribe to a new magazine. A representative of the magazine has asked you to give some feedback on their magazine.

Write a letter to him/her that includes the following information:



+ details of why you bought the magazine
+ what you liked about the latest edition
+ any improvement you would recommend
WRITE AT LEAST 150 WORDS

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to express my feeling about one of your latest magazines. I believe that you are on the right track when asking for customers' thoughts about your recently released publication.

Honestly, the reason why I decided to buy the magazine was its gorgeous cover and beneficial details. The title was typed in an outstanding font and frankly conveyed the main content in it. Basicly, that magazine's tages were truly servered my demand at that time.

One of the things I like the most is its information that writers put in, which was extremely practical and useful. In addition to that, not only the content but also the images illustrated did impress my visual sense. I suppose that the cleverness in selecting and matching each image to the topic played an important part in boosting the number of its readerships.

In my opinion, there was no fault in your product, it was completely perfect. I suggest that you should keep producing more magazines with multiple topics and concentrate on progressing the quality of content day by day.

I hope that my comments and recommendations would help you somehow.
Your faithfully,
Hannah Jamson.

I would appreciate any time and attention that teachers pay to my writing as well as helping me to fix any mistakes I made
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