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The bar chart illustrates data on the yearly salary of doctors and other workers in seven nations in a particular year (2004)
Overall, the figure for wages of doctors annually was greater than of other workers in all nations surveyed. In addition, the American doctors by far received the highest salary among their counterparts in other countries.
Italy, Czech Republic, Germany paid for doctors were almost the same. The figures are $60,000, about $65,000 and slightly over $60,000 respectively. Other workers' salary in these European nations is equal, at exactly $20,000. On the other hand, Finland paid $10,000 less for doctor and over $5,000 more than Italy for other workers.
As regard to the remaining countries, in 2004, the figure for paying doctors and other workers was the greatest among seven countries, at $120,000 and about $45,000 respectively. In 2004, France and Switzerland both spent $70,000 on paying each doctor. While about $30,000 was paid for other workers in France, this figure was exactly $40,000 in the case of Switzerland.
Please help me fix this Task 1 for IELTS test. Thank you.
The annual pay for doctors and other workers
The bar chart illustrates data on the yearly salary of doctors and other workers in seven nations in a particular year (2004)
Overall, the figure for wages of doctors annually was greater than of other workers in all nations surveyed. In addition, the American doctors by far received the highest salary among their counterparts in other countries.
Italy, Czech Republic, Germany paid for doctors were almost the same. The figures are $60,000, about $65,000 and slightly over $60,000 respectively. Other workers' salary in these European nations is equal, at exactly $20,000. On the other hand, Finland paid $10,000 less for doctor and over $5,000 more than Italy for other workers.
As regard to the remaining countries, in 2004, the figure for paying doctors and other workers was the greatest among seven countries, at $120,000 and about $45,000 respectively. In 2004, France and Switzerland both spent $70,000 on paying each doctor. While about $30,000 was paid for other workers in France, this figure was exactly $40,000 in the case of Switzerland.
The annual pay for doctors and other workers
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