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Posts by anthonyphan
Name: PHAN HOANG AN
Joined: May 3, 2020
Last Post: May 3, 2020
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From: Viet Nam
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anthonyphan   
May 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS PIE CHART: The charts illustrate the annual income and expense of a US charity organization. [4]

Revenue sources and expenditures of a USA charity



The charts illustrate the annual income and expense of a US charity organization in 2016.
Overall, the entity spent less money than they accumulated. The primary source of revenue was donated food and program service, and the majority of expenditures came from program service.

In regard to the revenue sources, donated food and community contributions accounted for exactly 97% of the money this entity accumulated ( donated food comprised of 86.6% and community contributions represented 10.4%). The remaining sources of revenue was program revenue (2.2%), investment income (0.2%), government grant (0.2%) and other income (0.4%). And the total revenue for the year was 53,561,580$.

In terms of expenditures, program service took the most significant part of total expenses the entity spent in 2016, which comprised of 95.8%. Beside that, the organization paid for fundraising activities (2.6%) and management and general (1.6%). And the total expenditure for the year was 53,224,896$



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anthonyphan   
May 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / The two maps represent some changes that were made on the island for tourism purposes. [4]

Overall, I think you have archived the task of describing the map. But I don't think these sentence (while not expanding the area of the island, the number of trees still remained the same, as well as their location.) needed to your essay because the map doesn't really provide the clear evidence for that statements.
anthonyphan   
May 3, 2020
Student Talk / How to enhance my English? [52]

Hi my friends, the question here really is how bad do you want it. I am no native but I think that one could achieve anything, if you pour your heart and soul in it. Just try to learn english like a baby. Together try hard mate.
anthonyphan   
May 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS PIE CHART: The graphs compare the different types of energy manufacture of France [2]

Comparison of energy production



The graphs compare the different types of energy manufacture of France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall, Using Coal, gas, and petro to produce energy account for the largest proportion of productions in both years. On the other hand, Nuclear energy production accounts for the least.

The percentage of Coal energy production in 1995 and 2005 are 29.80% and 30.93% respectively. Likewise, the proportion of Gas energy production in 1995 increased from 29.63% to 30.31% in 2005. However, in the same period, The ratio of Petro energy production in 1995 decreased from 29.27% to just 19.55%.

The percentage of Nuclear and other energy production both increased, Nuclear energy production increased from 6.4% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005, other energy production increased from 4.9% to 9.1%.
There is a clear trend that Energy production shifts from the conventional way of create energy to some modern way of doing it.



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