Minhthuy1993
Jul 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Task 1 AGRICULTURAL PRODUCION IN THE EASTERN AND WESTERN REGION-BARRON'S WRITING FOR THE IELTS [3]
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Minhthuy1993
Jul 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Task 1 AGRICULTURAL PRODUCION IN THE EASTERN AND WESTERN REGION-BARRON'S WRITING FOR THE IELTS [3]
The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the percentage of agricultural production in two various regions of the country including the Eastern Region and the Western Region. Overall, while the popular production in the Eastern Region is meat, grain is the most agriculture production in the Western Region.
In the eastern region, the highest popular production is meat, with exactly 35%. The second popular production raised is diary that accounts for 30%. This is five percentage point difference between the top two popular productions. Vegetables and grain made up the lowest proportions with 20% and 15% respectively.
In the western region, on the other hand, it is only concentrated on grain and meat that make up about half and a third of agricultural production respectively. Dairy falls to 15% and the lowest popular production is vegetables with only 5%.
In general, there is a different distribution of agricultural production in both two regions of the country.
East and West of a country - different agriculture
The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the percentage of agricultural production in two various regions of the country including the Eastern Region and the Western Region. Overall, while the popular production in the Eastern Region is meat, grain is the most agriculture production in the Western Region.
In the eastern region, the highest popular production is meat, with exactly 35%. The second popular production raised is diary that accounts for 30%. This is five percentage point difference between the top two popular productions. Vegetables and grain made up the lowest proportions with 20% and 15% respectively.
In the western region, on the other hand, it is only concentrated on grain and meat that make up about half and a third of agricultural production respectively. Dairy falls to 15% and the lowest popular production is vegetables with only 5%.
In general, there is a different distribution of agricultural production in both two regions of the country.
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Minhthuy1993
Jul 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS Book 10 Test 3 Task 2- more similarities between different countries [3]
then serve to give
every people's needs
tranied = trained
a healthy life style
then serve to give
every people's needs
tranied = trained
a healthy life style
Minhthuy1993
May 15, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS- T2: Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished? [2]
Topic: Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Today, the issue of why criminals re-offend after being discharged from prison has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this problem can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be taken to tackle that.
Several reasons are cited to explain the emergence of this problem. First, since offenders are poverty, they will be inclined to commit crimes after releasing from prison. In fact, because of their criminal records, they are unaccepted in society, which makes finding a job more difficult and they often have no way of making a living as a result that they have to continue breaking laws. Second, by being sent in prison, offenders mix with other criminals who can be a negative influence. They are easily persuaded to continue engaging in unlawful activities.
Nevertheless, there are several feasible solutions to this problem. First, in order to reduce the rate of crime, governments should have rehabilitation programs that prisoner for release into society. For example, prisons should provide education and vocational training for offenders to learn new skills like cooking, and gardening, which helps criminals return to the community. Second, if offenders feel useful in their communities, they will not re-offend. Plenty of evidence suggests that when offenders are accepted in society as others, they are able to find a job that helps them support themselves and their family, which leads to the delinquency's reduction.
In conclusion, this problem is caused by many reasons, and some solutions will be considered to solve it. By considering all reasons, governments can choose the best decision to diminish the rate of crime.
270 words
Thank you!
why criminals re-offend after being discharged from prison
Topic: Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Today, the issue of why criminals re-offend after being discharged from prison has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this problem can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, some feasible solutions can be taken to tackle that.
Several reasons are cited to explain the emergence of this problem. First, since offenders are poverty, they will be inclined to commit crimes after releasing from prison. In fact, because of their criminal records, they are unaccepted in society, which makes finding a job more difficult and they often have no way of making a living as a result that they have to continue breaking laws. Second, by being sent in prison, offenders mix with other criminals who can be a negative influence. They are easily persuaded to continue engaging in unlawful activities.
Nevertheless, there are several feasible solutions to this problem. First, in order to reduce the rate of crime, governments should have rehabilitation programs that prisoner for release into society. For example, prisons should provide education and vocational training for offenders to learn new skills like cooking, and gardening, which helps criminals return to the community. Second, if offenders feel useful in their communities, they will not re-offend. Plenty of evidence suggests that when offenders are accepted in society as others, they are able to find a job that helps them support themselves and their family, which leads to the delinquency's reduction.
In conclusion, this problem is caused by many reasons, and some solutions will be considered to solve it. By considering all reasons, governments can choose the best decision to diminish the rate of crime.
270 words
Thank you!