VicAl25092020
Jun 11, 2020
Writing Feedback / Whether university students should study whatever they like or not [3]
Some grammartical and spelling errors are as follows :
- It should be "Whilst being able to choose subjects freely ... ".
- "receives".
- The verb "opt" usually goes with "for" (opt for sth)
- "...to strengthen their expertise." You 'd better use "improve" instead of "strengthen" in this context.
- "communication skills"
- "...ignore crutial ones..." I think you mean "crucial".
- " ... for the purpose is ...". You can't use verb to be here. Instead, you can use "for the purpose of", "with a view to","in order to".
- "... they are inadequate science ...". It is " ... they have inadequate..."
Some grammartical and spelling errors are as follows :
- It should be "Whilst being able to choose subjects freely ... ".
- "receives".
- The verb "opt" usually goes with "for" (opt for sth)
- "...to strengthen their expertise." You 'd better use "improve" instead of "strengthen" in this context.
- "communication skills"
- "...ignore crutial ones..." I think you mean "crucial".
- " ... for the purpose is ...". You can't use verb to be here. Instead, you can use "for the purpose of", "with a view to","in order to".
- "... they are inadequate science ...". It is " ... they have inadequate..."