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Jul 3, 2020
Writing Feedback / Young generations now spend more time and money following fashion trends. To what extend do you agre [7]
@RomanKoch
I rewrote my essay, I forgot to analyse the question before writing. Are there any grammatical errors and word choice?
While I accept that this tendency might be good for them in some ways, I would argue that ...
To begin with, there are several benefits of keeping up with the latest fashion. Firstly, this ...
..., they will feel isolated when ...
However, I believe this trend is ...
... trends is beneficial to the young generation in some extent, I do not think this ...
@RomanKoch
I rewrote my essay, I forgot to analyse the question before writing. Are there any grammatical errors and word choice?
While I accept that this tendency might be good for them in some ways, I would argue that ...
To begin with, there are several benefits of keeping up with the latest fashion. Firstly, this ...
..., they will feel isolated when ...
However, I believe this trend is ...
... trends is beneficial to the young generation in some extent, I do not think this ...