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Jul 14, 2020
Writing Feedback / Is internet convince to us or to swindlers? [3]
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The trend of shopping online have been viral these days and famous online market like Amazon have became one of the biggest company in the world. In my point of view, there are two advantages which is the convenience and its user friendly.
With the help of internet, we could buy our necessity and without going out for example air tickets., By clicking a few buttons, we could filter all of the products from around the world that we want and ship to our countries within a few days. In my own experiences, it takes only couple of days from recognised my needs to receive the product without taking my wallet out.
Speaking of not going out of our home, online shopping is users friendly. In the old days, shopping could be one of the difficulty to the disable people and elderly. But with the help of internet, no matter of the deaf and dump, they could buy the necessities whenever they want, and more importantly without any help.
Undeniably, the advantage of users friendly could be also a disadvantage to children. Nowadays the age of owning a phone or a electricity devices have been younger and younger, which means children could fall into trap easily. Moreover, adolescences that do no to take good control of their money could also fell into traps easily. Despite the risk of falling into the traps, I believe it is more essential for us to teach them the correct concept of personal finance.
Nevertheless the disadvantage to the kids, the disadvantage could be erased by correcting the misconception. As a result, I do believe that the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvantage.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The trend of shopping online have been viral these days and famous online market like Amazon have became one of the biggest company in the world. In my point of view, there are two advantages which is the convenience and its user friendly.
With the help of internet, we could buy our necessity and without going out for example air tickets., By clicking a few buttons, we could filter all of the products from around the world that we want and ship to our countries within a few days. In my own experiences, it takes only couple of days from recognised my needs to receive the product without taking my wallet out.
Speaking of not going out of our home, online shopping is users friendly. In the old days, shopping could be one of the difficulty to the disable people and elderly. But with the help of internet, no matter of the deaf and dump, they could buy the necessities whenever they want, and more importantly without any help.
Undeniably, the advantage of users friendly could be also a disadvantage to children. Nowadays the age of owning a phone or a electricity devices have been younger and younger, which means children could fall into trap easily. Moreover, adolescences that do no to take good control of their money could also fell into traps easily. Despite the risk of falling into the traps, I believe it is more essential for us to teach them the correct concept of personal finance.
Nevertheless the disadvantage to the kids, the disadvantage could be erased by correcting the misconception. As a result, I do believe that the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvantage.