HANIEPHUONG
Sep 1, 2020
Writing Feedback / Many people say that we have developed into a "throw-away society" [5]
Thanks so much for your advice. I wrote again this paragraph. Is it better?
That is not to say that plastic bags just bring disadvantages to human life. In fact, people tend on single-use or disposable plastic because they seem that these items are cheaper, more convenient, and hygienic than some friendly-environment products. However, the negative effect of plastic bags on human life causes is far greater.
Thanks so much for your advice. I wrote again this paragraph. Is it better?
That is not to say that plastic bags just bring disadvantages to human life. In fact, people tend on single-use or disposable plastic because they seem that these items are cheaper, more convenient, and hygienic than some friendly-environment products. However, the negative effect of plastic bags on human life causes is far greater.
Thanks so much