Writing Feedback / People told that the internet is the most important inventions in later 30 years - agree or not? [4]

Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years

People told that the internet is the most important inventions in later 30 years. If we don't have it, our life will be different. However, someone told that the internet is bad invention. In my opinion, I completely agree with point of view that the internet is wonderful invention but not at all.

The internet plays an important part in our life. Firstly, internet has revolutionized the way we interact and keep in touch with each other. For example, instead of waiting a week so that we can give the letters to friend or relationship people, now we can call video live or give e-mail only some minutes. Especially , we can make friends around the world that we do not go anywhere. Moreover, in the internet societies, we can easy access to information about many fields such as education, science, technology....

Beside many benefits, the internet has many disadvantages. Nowadays, some studies find out many dangerous websites in the internet. They have many unhealthy contexts such as violence , obscenity or sex. These are not suitable for children and young people. When we have internet, we tend to do our jobs in front of computer and smartphone. This affects the see sight, behavior, thereby it is very unhealthy. In addition, there is a dramatic increase in the number of cyber-crime. More and more financial crimes are committed via internet.

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