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Oct 19, 2009
Writing Feedback / Sport and motivations - money influence? [5]

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asoa   
Oct 19, 2009
Writing Feedback / Sport and motivations - money influence? [5]

Affects money and fame motivations on youth and sports themselves in sport matches.
In all generations motivation on sport was crucial and today it isn't in a best way for youth and sport. Nowadays winners more time prefer and think about money which they will own after matches. Additionally, they have chances to become fame and change their life extremely. Consequently, all these opportunities influence to both adolescents and sport.

It affects bad because some time team loose persons whose have got ability to continue career, but their high achievements path them to an other sides. Money and fame distract them from professional sport and they waste more time to relax. Obviously, they don't concentrate much on trainings. Thus after getting medals their level reduced. There have got facts about some famous sportsman who afterwards tend to terrible behaviors. Evidently national teams are very significant for develop sport. Ever information about champions becomes priority and people make conclusion about them. As a result young people can't see the sport's positive aspects. Otherwise they may be more link sport with wealth and recognition.

Secondly sport become like challenges where fame and money are very noteworthy. This is the bad for games because it causes to forget some of them. So in this environment much kind of sports which are important for our heath can leave out.

Sport is one of the wonderful thing for our life and we should more give attention to on it's affects to maintain us healthy and out of any bad habits. For solving problem people who get some medals or names government can make agreement with them to continue their career in stabilized interests of each part.
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