Undergraduate / UBC personal profile question on how you dealt with unfamiliar and difficult situation [5]

@SofiaJohnson
Overall, good points with specific evidence to back up. However, your ending is fairly cliche, of course "hard work always pays off."

Personally, how is the lesson you learned applicable to other areas of your life, or moving forward in life? Maybe try and cut down a little on your exposition and work more on developing what you learned and how you plan to use that in the future.