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Dec 26, 2020
Writing Feedback / Soccer players - IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Bar chart [2]
Overall, the percentage of males playing soccer was the biggest while the opposite was true for netball. Whereas Netball was the most popular sport for females. In addition, the biggest difference was in the number of males and females playing netball.
As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of males choosing soccer was approximately 24% while that of females was relatively smaller (about 5%). Also, the figure for other sports among males was 20%, twice as many as that of females. Cricket accounted for 10% and 2% in the percentage of males and females playing sport respectively.
Looking at the chart for more detail, tennis and basketball had the percentage of males and females choosing to play quite equal, around 7%. The figure for Netball among females stood at 25% while that among males was only 1%. The second most popular sport for females was swimming (about 22%). The data of males choosing swimming was relatively smaller (about 14%). In addition, the percentage of males and females were 4% and 3% respectively for jogging.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females played 9 different sports in the UK in the year 2008.
Overall, the percentage of males playing soccer was the biggest while the opposite was true for netball. Whereas Netball was the most popular sport for females. In addition, the biggest difference was in the number of males and females playing netball.
As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of males choosing soccer was approximately 24% while that of females was relatively smaller (about 5%). Also, the figure for other sports among males was 20%, twice as many as that of females. Cricket accounted for 10% and 2% in the percentage of males and females playing sport respectively.
Looking at the chart for more detail, tennis and basketball had the percentage of males and females choosing to play quite equal, around 7%. The figure for Netball among females stood at 25% while that among males was only 1%. The second most popular sport for females was swimming (about 22%). The data of males choosing swimming was relatively smaller (about 14%). In addition, the percentage of males and females were 4% and 3% respectively for jogging.
