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Dec 26, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 1 the number of books borrowed from four villages [3]
Overall, there was a rising trend in the number of books borrowed from Western Eaton, Church Mount as well as Sutton Wood, while the quantity of books borrowed from Rye slip was dropping. In June, the number of books borrowed from Ryeslip is the most popular, which was replaced by Sutton Wood in July and September. Therefore, the books borrowed from Sutton Wood became the most popular in the final month.
As for the number of books borrowed from Sutton Wood, at the beginning of period, there was an upward tendency in the number of books borrowed from Sutton Wood from 250 in June to about 260 in July, decreasing to 100 in August. Then it increased dramatically to 300 in September.
Finally, the figure of books borrowed from Western Eaton was seen to increase from 50 to 150 during from June to September, overtaking the number of books borrowed from Church Mount in July.
The line chart illustrates how many books are borrowed from four libraries during a 4-month period.
Overall, there was a rising trend in the number of books borrowed from Western Eaton, Church Mount as well as Sutton Wood, while the quantity of books borrowed from Rye slip was dropping. In June, the number of books borrowed from Ryeslip is the most popular, which was replaced by Sutton Wood in July and September. Therefore, the books borrowed from Sutton Wood became the most popular in the final month.
As for the number of books borrowed from Sutton Wood, at the beginning of period, there was an upward tendency in the number of books borrowed from Sutton Wood from 250 in June to about 260 in July, decreasing to 100 in August. Then it increased dramatically to 300 in September.
Finally, the figure of books borrowed from Western Eaton was seen to increase from 50 to 150 during from June to September, overtaking the number of books borrowed from Church Mount in July.
