Essays / How to write a 100 word Essay about yourself [3]

Personal profile essay

Hello!!! I am truly confused as to why they limit the words to a hundred, please help me. I have written a draft and I really think it's trash and I am really not confident to have anyone I know to look at it. I have no idea how I can make some dude at the scholarship agency choose me by writing a hundred words to tell them a lifetime of experience. There's lots that I could say but I don't know where to start, Alright enough talk please criticize my essay and also if you can suggest some strong points i could use to improve this trash essay.

here goes nothing, *I really don't have any writing skills on me so please go easy on me.

My name is " " I live in Batangas City in the Philippines with my family. I have four siblings and I am the youngest among them. I love music and I love singing. I like reading books and watching anime.I've always had an inquisitive mind, and it helped me push myself to studying and learning more things like instruments, languages and other things that I like.

I see myself as a person who perseveres through anything and cares for those around him. Today, I see everything I do as small steps to becoming a better person for the world.