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remy

Feb 10, 2021

Undergraduate / Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay [7]

@Holt
thank you so much for giving advice, I will rewrite this essay. but there are some questions I want to ask.
what if I do not have a specific academic goal like working on a particular type of job or company, what Waterloo can provide me is the chances that I can use to find out what my goal is.

And about showing familiarity with the Math program at Waterloo, will that be appropriate if I mention some academic accomplishments or alumina that I admire about the math program to show my familiarity with it?

and the part of my essay about coop and employment, thank you for point out that I should not mention that. I just want to show how the coop program can help me as a student. but I am confused that, do you mean I must not mention the employment as a reason or I should not mention the coop program at all? because the coop program is related to employment. and the coop program is one of the reasons why I apply for Waterloo. (and how the reviewers would know I am foreign just by reading my essay?

remy

Feb 10, 2021

Undergraduate / Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay [7]

waterloo aif form mathematics

I am applying for the math program of the university of waterloo, feel free to give any advice, I am a foreign student, so if there are any grammar or wording problems, please point them out, thank you.

Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo (*Required)
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit)

As a future math major student, I look forward to laying a foundation for my future career choice. Math is the fundamental panacea for almost every area, so during the process of learning different courses, I believe I can find the one career I am interested and adept in. Personally, my being preserving and rational lead my interest to the science field, especially math, which is tightly logically connected, allowing me to solve problems step by step. Choosing U of W for it having an entire faculty just for math, the rich recourses and options provide for me are Incomparable to all other universities in Canada. Also, considering my family's financial condition, waterloo's prestigious coop program matches my needs of enriching my employment experience and paying my tuition. I believe what I received in U of W can highlight my value and lead me to success