Writing Feedback / I like to live in big city like "Ahemdabad" [7]

I read your paragraph,first of all I think it is so scrambled and i guess your writing suffers a lot from lack of coherency.I guess if you use each paragraph to explain one clear feature of a big city it is more acceptable for example:

"City has a international airport, railway station and bus station to travel in city. Transportation and moving done by different way and easily, to any part of state. Big management institute. IIM, which is first ranked in the country. From many states students come here for higher education. There are colleges for different steams like, the science, the commerce, the arts. Asia's large hospital, CIVIL is in the Ahemdabad. There are many hospitals for mother and child, they give free services for them."

at first you talk about transportation and then you jump to hospitals and education system