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May 7, 2021
Writing Feedback / Island map - summaries the information and make comparisons where relevant [2]

Description of an island - before and after development



Two maps depict an island and compare the two points in time before and after the construction of several tourist facilities.
Before construction, the expansive island was pristine with a few trees and nothing else. There is a small beach next to the island, but it does not meet safety standards for swimming.

After the construction of some tourist facilities, the island has considerable change. They rearrange some trees due to make vacant land for the construction. Many accommodations are structured and arranged in a circle to facilitate travel by foot. There is a reception and a large restaurant to welcome and serve visitors. The visitors can swim on the beach because, after construction, the beach meets the safety standard for swimming. Tourist facilities also build a pier that connects the island with sailboats in the sea. The transportation system is quite convenient with footpath and vehicle tracking.

In conclusion, there are many changes after construction. It helps the island attracts visitors to visit and relax.



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