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May 14, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS Cambridge 13 Writing Task 1 Test 1 - Compare the Maps of City Hospital [2]
Please help me, I just look at some tips about task 1 and I really dont know assess my essay. I think on task 1 we dont need the conclusion, do we?
Overall, after three years, the path to get to the city hospital was upgraded with roundabouts. Besides, the features servicing for travel were improved, including a bus station and distinct car parks. According to both maps, the hospital was surrounded by ring road and people can access this by bus and car. On the west of hospital road, there was a bus station built in 2010 rather than a bus stop in 2007. To the opposite with the bus station, the car park for both staff and public in 2007 was only used for staff in 2010 and the new car park for use of public was built on the east of ring road.
Please help me, I just look at some tips about task 1 and I really dont know assess my essay. I think on task 1 we dont need the conclusion, do we?
Two maps demonstrate the direction to get to a city hospital of two different years (2007 and 2010).
Overall, after three years, the path to get to the city hospital was upgraded with roundabouts. Besides, the features servicing for travel were improved, including a bus station and distinct car parks. According to both maps, the hospital was surrounded by ring road and people can access this by bus and car. On the west of hospital road, there was a bus station built in 2010 rather than a bus stop in 2007. To the opposite with the bus station, the car park for both staff and public in 2007 was only used for staff in 2010 and the new car park for use of public was built on the east of ring road.
