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Jun 1, 2021
Writing Feedback / The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. [2]
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates a complete cycle of labeling shellfish before shipping to the overseas market.
Overall, the procedure of shellfish production includes several manmade steps, beginning with collecting data from the ocean in order to support the monitoring system to catch the shellfish easier, and concluding with delivering the stock internationally.
To start with, each small-scale fishing boat is equipped with GPS device so that it can detect shellfish's whereabouts and report the information to the satellite communication. Next, the monitor in Santiago is automated receiving the collection of locations and then proceeds to the next stage which is to dispatch a barcode label to certify catch.
Once the process is accomplished, the catch is transferred to the processing plant where the shellfish are labeled and prepared for being transported. After that, the consumers in the local and international regions receive the processed shellfish. Finally, the labeling shellfish is ready exported to the global market.
Hi there, my teacher graded my writing about band 6, but i really want to upgrade writing, please help. Much obliged<3
The cycle of labeling shellfish
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates a complete cycle of labeling shellfish before shipping to the overseas market.
Overall, the procedure of shellfish production includes several manmade steps, beginning with collecting data from the ocean in order to support the monitoring system to catch the shellfish easier, and concluding with delivering the stock internationally.
To start with, each small-scale fishing boat is equipped with GPS device so that it can detect shellfish's whereabouts and report the information to the satellite communication. Next, the monitor in Santiago is automated receiving the collection of locations and then proceeds to the next stage which is to dispatch a barcode label to certify catch.
Once the process is accomplished, the catch is transferred to the processing plant where the shellfish are labeled and prepared for being transported. After that, the consumers in the local and international regions receive the processed shellfish. Finally, the labeling shellfish is ready exported to the global market.
Hi there, my teacher graded my writing about band 6, but i really want to upgrade writing, please help. Much obliged<3
