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Aug 2, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2:Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our... [4]
"It is true that shopping online is becoming ....."
"shopping online can have pros and cons that affect our environment."
"Furthermore, natural resources and fuel... because of a reduction in new roads, ..."
"... I was surprised to find ..." we don't use personal opinion in this part.
Hopefully, it helps
I wish you success!
"It is true that shopping online is becoming ....."
"shopping online can have pros and cons that affect our environment."
"Furthermore, natural resources and fuel... because of a reduction in new roads, ..."
"... I was surprised to find ..." we don't use personal opinion in this part.
Hopefully, it helps
I wish you success!