Writing Feedback / Task 1: The diagram elaborates on the breakdown of making chocolate [2]

Task 1:

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram elaborates on the breakdown of making chocolate.
A course of 10 successive stages has been prominently given, beginning with planting cocoa trees and finishing with producing liquid chocolate.
To commence, the cocoa trees are grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia with a view to farmers' collecting of red pods to take the raw materials inside them - white cocoa beans. Subsequently, harvested pods are carefully separated into halves, from which the white cocoa beans are extracting. The beans are thereafter continuously fermented between the layers of banana leaves. Following the fermentation, the beans are spread out and prolongedly exposed under the sunlight until they turn brown in order to become dry. In the fifth step, dried beans are loaded in the same-sized large sacks before being moved to the factory by either trains or lorries.

Regarding the chocolate-making procedure in the factory, the beans initially undergo a roasting phase in the ovens at a temperature of 350 Celcius degree, which continually is taken into a flat, cylindrical machine to dispose of the outer shell, and simultaneously crush the roasted beans. Ultimately, the crushed beans are pressed under the high pressure of two rollers for the purpose of forming the liquid chocolate.

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Writing Feedback / TASK 2: Contradictory ideas whether organizing international sporting event is advantageous or not [3]

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Hosting an international sporting event is a high-leveled mission that only the developed countries can guarantee. Besides that, there are many contradictory ideas surrounding this topic that whether organizing such an event is advantageous or not. Personally, I believe both factors had equal measures of criticalness, and analyzing both views will prove the thesis.

On the one hand, the holding of large-scale competitions of sport brings the burden of finance to the nation, as well as the high pressure from the expectation of any parts of the world. To be more specific, the host nation needs to invest the nation's money, even incurring a gigantic amount of public debt from loans, to make full of the details of the world-class tournament for the purpose of protecting the solemn of the nation, and the quality of sports events under the very eyes of the world citizens. In other words, the host country needs to upgrade the existing facilities in the football yards where the tournament occurs and the infrastructure in its vicinity with a view to advertising the spectaculars in the cities as well as spending money on renting the high-leveled human resources. Some of the countries are not unfortunate that the sequences of this global event are the huge debt taking a roll on the public's budget, which they need to pay until the later generations. As a result, the bigger dept, the higher in money tax that the citizens must pay, leading to the depression in every aspect of this country, making hosting an international sports competition hardly a worthy endeavor.

On the other hand, if the host country can manage and control the investment for the international sports tournament, they can create a big positive impaction on their country's tourism and sports-related production consumption. Most of the countries of this type are the ones which have concrete in finances and the development, so they do not have worries about the pressure of money-related issues. Understandably, To take advantage of this situation, they always utilize the benefits from advertising the hot spots of their countries in order to place their country on the world map of tourism. Also, through the imagery displayed in the media, they can create a lasting impression and recognition, having a high ratio of people who want to check-in in the place where the global sport happens. Therefore they can attract numerous tourists to visit and explore their country, leading to the up-gradation in their reputation in the global market and their high profits.

In conclusion, organizing global sports events have both two-side impacts, which is up to the conditions of each nation.