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puspa   
Nov 15, 2009
Essays / IELTS Writing "agree and disagree" [12]

o i went thr the site but its only to translate it to another language..not 1 that i was looking for actually..but anyway tks for ur concern..
puspa   
Nov 12, 2009
Essays / IELTS Writing "agree and disagree" [12]

tks alot..i m wondering how i can improve my vocabulary next...exam in 1 week times..am very scared coz my vocabularly are really limit..this hinder me from getting the score i want
puspa   
Nov 11, 2009
Essays / IELTS Writing "agree and disagree" [12]

Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Artists like the musician, actors or songwriter should be allowed to express their creative sides to the public. Therefore, some people have argued that there should be no restrictions by the government on this. This essay will outlined on whether the government should set rules or not, on this creative people.

As this is the 21st century, people are allowed to have their say and rights. It goes the same for these artists. They should be allowed to express their thoughts and feelings through music, songwriting or drama. Governments should appreciate this group of people as they bring in revenue for the country by being successful when more people attend their shows and are likeable by people all around the world.

However, government had done a brilliant job in restricting some particular areas. Firstly, for example in most of the nations, there is a age limit of 16 to 18 years old for accessing adult films or those that are censored. This will prevent those young people from watching unnecessary parts that are inappropriate for them. Watching too much of those censored movies can have a negative impact on them now or in the future. Secondly, different people have various opinions when it comes to whether an artists should dress appropriately. For instance, in Brunei which is a Muslim country, governments in Brunei are strict about international artists who are performing there. There should be no vulgarity in the songs or they should dress appropriately. This has been the custom for a long time and people over there have to abide to it or they are not allowed to perform. We cannot argue in this case as it is the custom of the nation.

To put it in the nutshell, though government are doing the right way in having their say by limiting the age limit on the censored films, they should also allow the creative sides of this artists to be in full use by listening to their views.
puspa   
Oct 29, 2009
Essays / IELTS Writing "agree and disagree" [12]

tks 4 replying Stephen

in an essay qns that ask...to what extent do you agree or disagree?
or what is your opinion?

how do i need to write the essay?some textbk,they ask us to write about either agree or disagree?..n some books...says we have to write about the both...

can i only write about me agreeing and not mention anything about the disagreeing part...will i be penalised. for it...
n i know that for argument i have to write about both..abit confuse about the discussion essay..
hope to hear fr u again..
puspa   
Oct 28, 2009
Essays / IELTS Writing "agree and disagree" [12]

hi .
i really need help with my IELTS writing.Right now i am confused with the topic question. if they ask me abt discusson essay where they ask us abt agree or disagree. what do i have to write. some website only ask us to write abt only 1 topic..while some write about both agree and disagree..so which 1 is it.pls help
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