Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 - "Line graph about recruitment of teacher" [5]

introduction:
- compares the proportion
- I suppose that you used the wrong verb "enrolled" Therefore, it made your introduction digressive So I think that enrolled -> recruited because as far as I know "enrol for" is to put yourself or someone to become a member to take a certain course.

Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 1] MAP ABOUT A UNIVERSITY'S SPORTS CENTRE [7]

In my view, I suppose that the major change of this sports centre is that there won't be any outdoor sports areas in the future, instead of that it will be converted into a closed centre with a larger size. The change of the size was mentioned in your overview, but you did not support this.

Moreover, I also agree that there is no point in mentioning about there is no change to existing facilities as, for the most part, there will always be changes on IELTS map essays.