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Nov 8, 2009
Writing Feedback / TOEFL essay "Spending money on sport activities or library" [3]
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
While I was studing for the mid-term math exam, When I was preparing myself in the library for the midterm math exam, I saw the soccer players team of our department's team preparing themselves for big competition among universities; so a challenging question rose to my mind: Sholud universities should spend money equally, for both, sports activities and library equipments? , , rose in my mind.
Not surprisingly, spreading sport activities among college students is one of the responsibilities of university. Therefore, the policy of university's budgets should be considered a certain amount of money for this purpose. Prof. Qui , who is the head of a research group that studying the effect of exercises on the learning ability on UUT University, that, there is an unquestionable relation between the learning ability and sport activity. He also believes expending money for sport activities is not only useful for having healthy pupils but effective for having excellent students.
On the other hand,In addition, expanded libraries y in all fields, which needs more money, is a fundamental issue in the university. For illustration, extending the studying rooms in my university's library, of course although it was a costly project, led to attract students to study in library instead of dorm. Furthermore, having updated library with more copies of popular books is a result of spending sufficient amount of money for library.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the university must spend more money for library equipments than sport activities. Because student can contributes in either public sports or sport clubs for being healthy. And university should be a good place for focusing on learning.
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries". Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
While I was studing for the mid-term math exam, When I was preparing myself in the library for the midterm math exam, I saw the soccer players team of our department's team preparing themselves for big competition among universities; so a challenging question rose to my mind: Sholud universities should spend money equally, for both, sports activities and library equipments? , , rose in my mind.
Not surprisingly, spreading sport activities among college students is one of the responsibilities of university. Therefore, the policy of university's budgets should be considered a certain amount of money for this purpose. Prof. Qui , who is the head of a research group that studying the effect of exercises on the learning ability on UUT University, that, there is an unquestionable relation between the learning ability and sport activity. He also believes expending money for sport activities is not only useful for having healthy pupils but effective for having excellent students.
On the other hand,In addition, expanded libraries y in all fields, which needs more money, is a fundamental issue in the university. For illustration, extending the studying rooms in my university's library, of course although it was a costly project, led to attract students to study in library instead of dorm. Furthermore, having updated library with more copies of popular books is a result of spending sufficient amount of money for library.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the university must spend more money for library equipments than sport activities. Because student can contributes in either public sports or sport clubs for being healthy. And university should be a good place for focusing on learning.
