Writing Feedback / Does music pay a important role in people's life? [2]

Music is one of the essential component in our life. people play different music by the different stituation, different spirit and different culture. Some people even found that they cannot live without music. Indeed, music has its own attraction. For instance, music can provide us with relaxation just like our friends, it can teach us knowledge who resemble our teachers,it also acts as our parents to give us encouragement.

Music gives us entertainment and relaxation when we feel exhausted. The beauiful rhythm of the sofy music not only can relese our pressureh, but also can bring us pleasure. After a day-long-study,I like to take a break to listen to some pop melody by myself. Although some of those popular music are rock-and-roll, but they still can make me feel calm and comfortable. And it also can heal my tireing soul. Except for chatting with my friends, going karaoke with them, going shopping with them, I can find another way o relax myself, that is music.

We can gain different knowledge from the music. Although a piece of music is wery short, but actually it contains many elements. When we listen to the music, we do not just listen to its beautiful rhythm. We can read something in the same time because different music has its different background, different culure and different stories. It is more efficient to get the knowledge from hearing a music.

When we feel depressed, an encouraging song can give us power and encouragement. It can guide us the road while we facing the trouble. The encouraging words of a song just like our parents, it always tells us to be strong and not to give up.I believe anyone could be full of energy when they hear YOU ARE NOT ALONE, BORN TO TRY, REACH and so on.

Although manyof the recent music pieces are not so good as the old ones, but we cannot deny the influence that the music brings to us. It could bring us relaxation, knowledge and encouragement.

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Writing Feedback / sending criminals in jail or offering them education & job training [3]

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The traditional punishment for the criminal is to put them in jail for a period of time with being deprived of many personal right and political right, in other words, they cannot do anything they want. Of courerse, that period of the time need to depen on how serious the effect were brought the society by the criminal themselves. However, just put them in prison does not means can rebuild them radically, effectively and positively.

Anything comes from reason, nothing comes from nothing, so we should find the source before we solve a problem. People commit a crime must have their own reasons. For instance, a man steal money perhaps have different causations, for the money he stole could be the urgent need for his mother's medical fee, probably he go astray for lack of normal education during his childhood or maybe he could not make a living and so on. Therefore, I think we shoul give the criminals another chance to mend their ways, offer them some moral education or skill training which could be the thorough strategy to put them on the right track finally.

However, time is so short for everyone that we should make a good use of every second., even for a person who had make some mistakes. Instead of let them stay in prison and do nothings, why not to let them to lean something skillfully which not only benefit the malefactors themselves, but also could be propitious to the whole society.

In addition, putting the people in prison too long could make them feel despair to the world and cultivate the negative view of their life. Yet, it is meaningless to let them back to the society after they complete a term of imprisonment. The government should conduct the criminals from the positive ways by using education.

Although, the criminals should pay for their mistake and they deserve to receive the relative punishments, some of them are even dangerous to our society. But to my way of thinking, offering the criminal some education and job training instead of putting them in jail is the most thorough, efficient and positive path the guide them back to our society