Linna2002
Jul 12, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 The maps below show a breachfront area in AUsstralia in 1950 and today [4]
Overall, significant changes have been made in term of the front coast, especially on the eastern side of the beach. ・Firstly, the beachfront has been developed and the number of car park has increased
In 1950, there was only a road branch lead to the car park. A road has been expanded to the beach, as there are now two car parks, which are belonging to the road. The playground has been replaced by the car park the dinning tables and pavillon remains in the same place, which is located in the middle of two car parks. The light house remains in the same place and appears at the end of the road. Two clubs have been constructed opposite each other. The surf club is located on the west side near the 50m pool. And the other club is located near the lighthouse and the 25m pool. There were two pools having the same size, which is 25m but the one on the west side has been changed and is now much larger. A restaurant has been built up near the 50m pool. Finally, the beach is unchanged.
The maps illustrate how the beachfront area in Australia changed in 1950 and the present day.
Overall, significant changes have been made in term of the front coast, especially on the eastern side of the beach. ・Firstly, the beachfront has been developed and the number of car park has increased
In 1950, there was only a road branch lead to the car park. A road has been expanded to the beach, as there are now two car parks, which are belonging to the road. The playground has been replaced by the car park the dinning tables and pavillon remains in the same place, which is located in the middle of two car parks. The light house remains in the same place and appears at the end of the road. Two clubs have been constructed opposite each other. The surf club is located on the west side near the 50m pool. And the other club is located near the lighthouse and the 25m pool. There were two pools having the same size, which is 25m but the one on the west side has been changed and is now much larger. A restaurant has been built up near the 50m pool. Finally, the beach is unchanged.
The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today.
