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Name: Sasmita Das
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Lebica_97   
Aug 3, 2022
Scholarship / Special teaching - GKS UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT [4]

This seems to be good start, but as you said you love teaching you need to also point how how korea or gks is going to help in that matter.

Again the prompts provided in guidelines are missing like family background and how they help you with your goal.

Next it seems that the whole essay is only about motivation.

Miss nicky has been involved a lot in last 2-3 paras. Its good that she helped you a lot but then again don't do it much.

All the best
Lebica_97   
Aug 3, 2022
Writing Feedback / In some cultures, the old is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Both views [4]

In place of on the other hand you can use however or apparently

Like you compared both the era perfectly in first paragraph , I feel that the same should be continue in further paragraph. So that you can give your clear opinion simulatenuosly.

Essays become more impressive with quotes so if possible please use one (not more than two ).

You did a good job with the flow.

All the best
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