Lebica_97
Aug 3, 2022
Scholarship / Special teaching - GKS UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT [4]
This seems to be good start, but as you said you love teaching you need to also point how how korea or gks is going to help in that matter.
Again the prompts provided in guidelines are missing like family background and how they help you with your goal.
Next it seems that the whole essay is only about motivation.
Miss nicky has been involved a lot in last 2-3 paras. Its good that she helped you a lot but then again don't do it much.
All the best
This seems to be good start, but as you said you love teaching you need to also point how how korea or gks is going to help in that matter.
Again the prompts provided in guidelines are missing like family background and how they help you with your goal.
Next it seems that the whole essay is only about motivation.
Miss nicky has been involved a lot in last 2-3 paras. Its good that she helped you a lot but then again don't do it much.
All the best