Scholarship / Questbridge National College Match: Proudest Achievement Short Answer Question [2]

Question:

Tell us about one of your proudest achievements or moments and what it says about you.

(Word limit: 200)

"I would like to call (first name, last name) and congratulate him for becoming a first-degree Black Belt!" my grandmaster exclaimed as I smiled vigorously. I envisioned this moment since the first day I stepped foot on the mat during the summer going into the eighth grade. There were countless empty days and nights where I thought to myself "why am I doing this?" or "I just want it all to end." Fortunately, I was able to let go of this negative mindset and channeled it into motivation. Through pure hard work and dedication, I was able to undergo one of the most rigorous training I have ever witnessed. Being able to overcome the never-ending blood, sweat, and tears since day 1 is an accomplishment I take immense pride in. I held up the certificate of completion for my academy and parents to take photos of. As I looked at my parents, I see the glistening eyes of my mother and father who were so proud of me. They imagined this very moment ever since my father saw an ad on a giant billboard. This was a bittersweet moment I will never forget.

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