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Sep 19, 2022
Writing Feedback / Some individuals like to put more effort in their work [5]

In education and employment, some people work harder than others.

Why do some people work harder?

Due to some reasons, barely any individuals like to put forth additional attempts at their establishments and working environments when contrasted with their friends. This essay will outline the cause. Moreover, from my perspective, this trend brings them a wide range of demerits.

That working more harder is attributed to numerous reasons. First of all, a breathtaking career in future is the major motivator that drive them to outperform in their enviroment. For examble, in education, a high ability- degree is always an exceptional outcome which they archieved after not only a ponderous but also long progress, thus, they will be high rately employed in a well-known corparation. For employment, hardworking staffs simply are promoted to a higher position. Sencondly, in case of education, understudies are urged to invest additional amounts of energy into their educational plan. Since teachers are bound to see the value in such splendid kids, who have passing marks. By best performents, they are tent to have a well-point by instructors. In this way, really buckling down can give critical compensations to exceptionally energetic individuals.

Continuing on, while enterprising nature is considered as a recipe that prompts achievement, exhaust could have adverse results. Outworking can lead to unwanted consequence such as inorgintg social activities. Especially, they can face some health problems as conspicuous as obesity, exhausted due to their duration they sit without movement or doing too much. Finally, that everyone all thinks that working hard is the only way that help them have opportunities to promote is a wrong concern in the age that almost evething can buy and do by pay money or relationship, therefore, it is a disadvantage for who try hard to archieve their wishes regardless of how industriousness they are.

Taking everything into account, albeit difficult work can be helpful to have better review and fruitful profession, not every one of the outcomes of its have been positive.