StarShallRise
Oct 30, 2022
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1: Police department's sources of funding and allocation of funds. [2]
The provided pie charts and table show the sources and distribution of money in a particular police department in the U.K in the two years of 2017 and 2018.
Overall, an upward trend can be discerned in the budget, and Technology's share of funds increased while that of Salaries dipped.
With respect to how the police were funded, a total of 318.6 million pounds was allocated to the department in 2018, up from 304.7 million pounds the year before. In addition, the amount of money funded by National Government and other sources saw sizable increases of 10 and 2.3 million pounds respectively. In contrast, the rise in funding from local taxes was relatively minor, coming at only 0.5 million pounds.
With regard to budgetary allocation, while the percentage of money spent on Buildings and Transport remained constant at 17% from 2017 to 2018, the remainder experienced change. First, compared with 2017, spending on Technology accounted for a bigger portion of the budget in 2018 . Funds allotted for Salaries, however, dropped slightly to 69% from 75% in the same time span.
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police budget 2017-2018
The provided pie charts and table show the sources and distribution of money in a particular police department in the U.K in the two years of 2017 and 2018.
Overall, an upward trend can be discerned in the budget, and Technology's share of funds increased while that of Salaries dipped.
With respect to how the police were funded, a total of 318.6 million pounds was allocated to the department in 2018, up from 304.7 million pounds the year before. In addition, the amount of money funded by National Government and other sources saw sizable increases of 10 and 2.3 million pounds respectively. In contrast, the rise in funding from local taxes was relatively minor, coming at only 0.5 million pounds.
With regard to budgetary allocation, while the percentage of money spent on Buildings and Transport remained constant at 17% from 2017 to 2018, the remainder experienced change. First, compared with 2017, spending on Technology accounted for a bigger portion of the budget in 2018 . Funds allotted for Salaries, however, dropped slightly to 69% from 75% in the same time span.
181 words
Thank you, in advance, so much for your time and efforts to correct my essay. Have a nice weekend :)
