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Name: anokhsingh soin
Joined: Dec 1, 2022
Last Post: Dec 4, 2022
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Imaginedragon   
Dec 4, 2022
Undergraduate / Everything is Engineered - Waterloo AIF for Electrical Engineering [2]

2.

Briefly explain why you are interested in engineering and particularly in the program to which you have applied.


Comment, for example, on your interests and abilities; your career goals; exposure to engineering through school-related and other experiences; and discussions you have had with engineers, teachers, and current or past Waterloo students. (900 character limit)


Ans:
Almost everything around us is engineered, from the cars we drive around to the electronics we use daily. From a young age, I always had a passion for math and problem solving, because of this I competed in math competitions such as kangaroo and recently did the CEMC. In my physics classes, my teacher played a big role in my passion for engineering. Teaching and doing experiments about electricity and magnetism really intrigued me and made me want to further my education. Engineering is also a very hands-on job which leaves no room for boredom. My father and I together did the wiring of our basement, this introduced me to new concepts such as switches and what an overload is. As an Electrical engineer, I want to make a difference and tackle climate change problems and provide and help have a positive influence on society to make it a better place to live.

One essay per thread. More useless comments = Ban.
Imaginedragon   
Dec 4, 2022
Writing Feedback / Fashion industry's impact on society [7]

@hehehehe345
You have too many short sentences, try to combine sentences that are talking about the same topic
for example:

... consequences, for example, a lack of money dues to ...
Imaginedragon   
Dec 1, 2022
Undergraduate / Waterloo AIF for Electrical Engineering; electrical circuits knowledge [2]

Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo

(*Required)
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit)


Ans:
Electrical engineers are the ones who develop electrical equipment and design safety for the equipment. My interest in engineering started to develop when I took a computer engineering course and gained knowledge about electrical circuits. This inspired me to make a car that moved and guided itself solely on electric power. But, this is only the basic project that I have designed, I want to create something that will have a positive impact on humanity. My educational goal is to have the boundless opportunity to grow and learn more about electrical engineering. Waterloo focuses on completing teamwork projects which creates a real-world environment. This can help me gain and enhance skills that I've learned, and utilize my expertise in co-op to help solve environmental problems.

Can someone please check this over and be very strict about it thanks
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